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The Number 17

Foto de perfil de Hannah OluwafunmilayoHannah OluwafunmilayoCómic clásico1 página · 6 viñetasPublicado el 21 abr 2026

El cómic terminado

1 página · 6 viñetas
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The Number 17: página 1, viñeta 1: The floodlit Kingsbridge Football Stadium looms under a night sky, the scoreboard a stark, digital wound. The home crowd's murmuring despair is almost palpable as the clock ticks past the hour mark.
64th minute. Kingsbridge FC 0, Rivals 2. A heavy silence descends.
2
The Number 17: página 1, viñeta 2: On the Kingsbridge bench, Luca sits calmly amidst the tension. His eyes, though fixed on the distant field, betray a quiet intensity, a readiness that belies the team's current predicament.
On the bench, Luca Vale, Number 17, watches. Ready.
3
The Number 17: página 1, viñeta 3: Coach Renard, a picture of barely contained frustration, spins around. His gaze locks onto Luca, a silent command passing between them. Javier, a teammate next to Luca, looks up, surprised by the coach's sudden call.
Coach Renard:Luca! Get ready!
Javier:Luca?
4
The Number 17: página 1, viñeta 4: The Fourth Official raises the substitution board, glowing brightly against the stadium's darkness. The numbers '17 IN' flash prominently, causing a ripple of murmurs and gasps of surprise to spread through the sparse crowd.
A collective gasp from the stands. Number 17 is in.
5
The Number 17: página 1, viñeta 5: Luca rises from the bench, his movements fluid and focused. He takes a deep breath, adjusting his jersey, his face a mask of resolute determination. Javier watches him go, a silent mix of hope and admiration on his face.
Luca Vale
My turn.
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The Number 17: página 1, viñeta 6: Luca walks towards the pitch, his back to the viewer, the name 'VALE' and number '17' emblazoned on his jersey. The stadium lights blaze behind him, casting a heroic silhouette as he steps onto the field, ready to change the game.
The game awaits. A new hope steps onto the pitch.

Historia original

Escrita por Hannah Oluwafunmilayo

Black-and-white pencil manga comic page, clean line art, 5 panels. Football stadium under lights. Scoreboard shows Kingsbridge FC 0–2 rivals, 64th minute. Luca sits calmly on the bench in full kit, jersey #17, short messy football haircut, focused eyes. Coach Renard stands and calls him. Fourth official raises substitution board showing 17 IN. Crowd murmurs in surprise. Final dramatic panel: Luca walking toward the pitch, back view showing VALE 17, stadium lights behind him, cinematic tension, clear readable composition, minimal crowd detail

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